Broken

Guilt and pain

Have you ever cried out till your head hurt bad?
Has guilt ever dragged you and driven you mad?
I guess not, that's why you can't understand.
That i am strong, i fight as much as i can.


This pain is searing, it hurts so much already.
But you ignore my words, even after you've heard me.
I've never needed much from you, just your love and care.
Maybe i asked too much of you, well you were just my friend



Have you ever cried till your eyes felt sore?
And you wanted to stop, but just cried some more
Untill the broken pieces come together and stay
My peace is like a drifting cloud, floating away.

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Ah! What an expression and correct choice of words. Yes, I have felt the way you have described and I can understand your words and your emotions. You are not alone my friend.

[Avia]

Thanks Najam. Sometimes we feel like we're alone in what we're going through. It's good to know that's not the case.

[Najam Us Saher]

You are right. If you feel like sharing anything, I am always there to listen to you. Don't you ever feel that you are alone.
It is always my pleasure to be there for someone.

[Gee]

Reading this not quite sure as to whether or not there is meant to be a rhyme scheme throughout. A little disjointed.

[Avia]

I thought there was. I'll look at it again and try to see what you mean. Thanks for the review.

[Zoya]

A very emotional piece. I could feel it. Also very relatable. Well done. Keep writing!

[Avia]

Thanks Zoe. I felt really bad at that moment and just wanted to express myself. I'm glad you were able to relate to it

[Zoya]

Hope you're feeling better now. It was my pleasure.

[Avia]

Yes i am :) thanks for asking

[Zoya]

Great. No problem :)