Nowhere

Silence, quiet, peace, serenity.
Beauty, music, life, tranquility.
Disappear, vanish, hidden, unseen.
Lost, free, gone with the wind.
I long to feel, the wind in my hair.
Watch a sunset, have stories to share.
Not trapped in four walls and a daily routine.
I want to chase rainbows and sleep in the trees.
To colour my life with the blue of the sky.
Red of the earth, and green of the vine.
Open my eyes to the sun up above me.
Hearing the birds and the songs they are singing.
The plains i would walk on, the air so filling.
The grass under my feet, i'd love such a feeling.
At peace with myself, forgetting the past.
I'd cherish those moments, as long as they last.

Reviews

[Zoya]

Lovely fantasy...though I know how hard it is to achieve. Beautifully written

[Avia]

Thanks Zoe :)

[Zoya]

No problem

[Swetha]

Very beautifully constructed poetry, good work

[Avia]

Thanks for reading, i'm glad you like it

[Bear]

I really like the way you constructed the wording it is very well thought out and shows your word wise. There is depth and vivid imagery as well as a whimsical element but still delivers an intelligent and inspiring work of literature. Bravo! I give it five out of five Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Avia]

Thanks a lot for the nice comment. I appreciate it. :)

[Bear]

I call em as I see em :~)

[emipoemi]

I have one word for you: Beautiful! Despite the occasional half and cheat rhymes that seemingly mar the sound of the piece, this paints a grand picture and tells a good story. Well done!

[Avia]

I really appreciate the fact that you read and review my work. Thanks.

[emipoemi]

The pleasure is all mine. That's my game.