Learn

Learn

A Poem by Avia
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Just something that came to mind

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Learn to let go.
Learn to know.
Learn to say no.
Learn to grow.
Learn to lend a hand.
Learn to take a stand.
Learn to give your best.
Learn to pass the test.
Learn to dream big, aim high.
Learn to spread your wings and you just might fly.
Learn to hold on to the things worth keeping.
Learn to withdraw yourself from things that are leaving.
Learn to compromise for another's happiness.
Learn to go through life and be happy through the stress.
Learn to love and live.
Learn to sow and give.
Learn to forgive yourself and repent.
Learn to account for time that has been spent.
Learn to forgive others and move on.
Learn to pray through the pain and stay strong.
Learn to be you, and love who you are.
Learn to be beautiful inside, and you won't see the scars.
Learn to be simple and humble.
Learn to call on God in all of your trouble.
Learn to be strong and hopeful through strife.
Learn to be joyful, and grateful for life.

© 2017 Avia


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You have a good motivational poem here. A good message delivered with great musicality. I would only suggest to take out certain "learn to"'s, particularly in the shorter lines, for hearing them constantly like, especially in close proximity, gets a little monotonous. The repetition after the longer lines sounds good, but after the shorter lines no much.... it can be dispensed with and the poem will still have a good flow. Well done!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Avia

7 Years Ago

I'm glad you like it. Thanks for the review and suggestions. I'll take note of them.



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You have a good motivational poem here. A good message delivered with great musicality. I would only suggest to take out certain "learn to"'s, particularly in the shorter lines, for hearing them constantly like, especially in close proximity, gets a little monotonous. The repetition after the longer lines sounds good, but after the shorter lines no much.... it can be dispensed with and the poem will still have a good flow. Well done!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Avia

7 Years Ago

I'm glad you like it. Thanks for the review and suggestions. I'll take note of them.
I wrote it and wanted to share. I always just hope my writings speak to someone.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Taking this life's journey one step at a time with faith. I love to write and I enjoy reading beautiful pieces of writing. Follow me on Instagram: hikky_avia more..

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