One Day Your Wolf Will Come

 Oh, look at you.

Little Piggy With Bulging Eyes.

Straightened hair and cellulite thighs

fake laughs and exaggerated lies.

One day your wolf will come.

He'll caress those thighs

and eat your tiny sighs.

He'll wrip you apart bit by bit

And, by then, I won't give a tiny inkling of a s**t.

Reviews

[Adela Muresan]

Wierd piece.
I would lie if I said I liked it in any way, but I suppose it is somewhat true, since only some fatties get to meet the wolf.

A.M.

[~angelalala~]

i loved this poem. so darky written, so angry. i like the bitter sarcasm in this. one day, a wolf comes for all of us. the ending line is powerful, & definately gets the point across. very nice write.

[Lee E. Powell]

Contempt! Awesome, I can picture certain people i know while i read this. Now, like i said before, i dont know much about poetry but i think the word 'inkling' fit very well and wouldn't change a thing.

[Annalisa]

...Wow... erotic and yet so full of hate at the same time. I think ever girl want the day her wolf will come, yet fears it just as much... The last line changes the direction of the poem, almost makes it two in one... Sorry, I'm rambling on here but I really enjoyed this. The only critique that I have it the last line is a bit awkward, I think that "inkling" disrupts the flow of it and jars the reader a bit. That may have been intentional since the last line is so jarring anyway, but I am a personal believer in the flow of poetry... so it kinda bothers me.

But this was great... and I'm steeling it for my favorites.