Hollow

When I walk away 

        (If that’s what it is.)

My mind is racing 

As is my heart.

My hands tremble, 

My breath is warm.

We are hollow

        (And this seems best.)

If all I give is nothing

We will never be apart.

 

 

Reviews

[Laoidhigh Uilleag]

What i got from it was that its a love poem, and that you get nervous around them, and you don't want to tell them about your feelings because if you do i might end. So in doing nothing are still seeing eachother and stll in a way together. I guess i got that because it is what relates to me, but im sure someone else can interpert the same thing. I don't read very many small poems, but i like this one since you can interpret them dif, and this is well written in tone.

[Seracies]

I'm not sure I understand the idea of your poem, but I did enjoy the voice of it, the way the words carried out into each line with such personality.