Cigarette

You’re just like a 

Cigarette,

As soon as you’re 

gone

I want another one yet.

All I’m left with is a 

Smoldering pile of 

ashes.

        

 

Reviews

[Lee E. Powell]

Well this kind of reminds me of my ex sometime into our marriage lol. I really liked this one.

[Illegitimate Artist]

Really great imagery. Short but I like it that way, wouldn't change it if I could, very straight to the point.

[Anima Inspired]

All too real... I can relate to the sentiment of this piece. At first read I felt that this might be a little "choppy" in terms of flow, but as I read it again I rather liked the line breaks where they were, as they placed a certain importance on words that I feel really evoked feeling. Short, simple, and yet complex in nature...