Valley of Blessing

Life is a road. 

We can jump in car 

and drive to where we're going. 

The destination that we choose

is a Valley of Dreams. 

The Valley of Dreams is the destination 

that we have laid out in the early days 

of our lives. 

So today is the day 

that we go to the Valley. 

But where there are roads

there are accidents that simply delay us 

from a short period of time 

and for a while we can choose 

to complain out of anger 

or wait till it passes. 

After going through a rough time, 

we go to Valley 

but it is not Valley of Dreams,

it is the Valley of Defeat. 

The Valley of Nothing. 

Just the Valley. 

So what do we do 

when we're in the Valley? 

We can find something good in that valley 

like a flower, tip of grass, a pudle or a pool, and even an animal. 

We can find life in the valley when there's nothing 

that we want or expected. 

We just turn it into a bleesing. 

Through every closed door, 

Through every loss, 

Through every unexpected turn, 

there's always a way pull things through 

and find that happinings have reason. 

In the Valley of Bleesing, 

there's always life at every turn.     

  

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Ana B.]

A beautiful deep poem if inner stength we all have, but need a reminder or two. Wonderful write :)

[Jamestown]

Really enjoyed this piece, I like the idea of the valley of blessings!
Very creative and great message, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!