The Cold Decitful Weather

This is my feelings on how I view the weather today, as it is cold.

The Air is more frozen 

The Sky maybe blue 

But the atmosphere reveals all 

The Blue Sky is deceiving with appearance

The Air is frozen strong 

The Weather has become cold 

The atmosphere is the North Pole in your front yard

Only there's no snowing 

The breeze is strong like a popsicle 

The sun may warm up, but only for a slight minute

The number of this beast's strength is 46 degrees

Enough to freeze your nerves 

The weather cuts you down low 

Low to your lowest point 

The point of cold movement in walking 

With signs of depression and hopelessness

You can barely imagine anything fun at this moment 

There is nothing 

Nothing to change the weather 

Nothing to do but keep walking 

And hope that the weather is hot tomorrow 

Because the heat is really where you get going      

   

    

Author's Note

What do you think? Pretty good writing right. :) Lend your reviews.

Reviews

[~]

A strong and good description of the cold for someone that lives in Florida. :)

[Jamestown]

This is terrific again my friend, I'm headed back to Colorado next month and not
looking forward to the cold, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!