The Violin

The Violin

A Poem by AFX787359
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A haiku about the violin that I wrote a few years ago. :P

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Singing with no words

While opening our hard hearts

It closes our eyes

© 2010 AFX787359


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AFX787359
It sucks I know. :P Reviews are appreciated! :P

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...while opening our hard hearts...
That's a pretty powerful line. Your poem reminds me of the quote: "Where words fail, music speaks."
It's not bad at all, maybe you should graduate from haiku writing and try your hand at actual poetry? I'd really enjoy reading that.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I believe I best appreciate music when closing my eyes and ignoring all other distractions. Great job capturing that!

Posted 9 Years Ago
...while opening our hard hearts...
That's a pretty powerful line. Your poem reminds me of the quote: "Where words fail, music speaks."
It's not bad at all, maybe you should graduate from haiku writing and try your hand at actual poetry? I'd really enjoy reading that.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

omg haikus! no way, i liked it! the violin is truly a magnificent instrument, and your description of it was flawless!

Posted 14 Years Ago

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 Added on January 11, 2010
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Tags: Violin, Haiku

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AFX787359

Monroeville, PA



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