happily ever after

Do some one really believes in "happily ever after". For the ones who do believe in happily ever after end good for you and for those who dont believe in it , here's a composition for you.....

You read a comic, you make a laughter,
Because the story ends happily ever after.

But life is not a fairy a tale, 
Many a times you may fail
While you look for prosperity,
there will always be irregularity.

When rational's are newly arisen,
find yourself in state prison
life spent alone in jail,
no one to get you out in bail.

Thoughts gathered in the drafter,
never like to remember thereafter.
you regret things hereafter 
realizing life is not happily ever after.
Life is not happily ever after.

Author's Note

thought it would be nice to write something on happily ever after topic.

Reviews

[Sreenath]

hi avanthika ,
this is nice writing.... apologies for reviewing it late.. i will split this review into two sections what i liked and what i got confused about.
the things that i liked:
1) great theme to dig upon.
2) mixed emotions.

things that found weird about
1) you could have used better words
2)thereafter, hereafter and drafter these words are founded to be stressed to rhyme
3) there is no connection between of first two lines to rest of the piece

well , its just suggestion no offense... enjoyed reading it
keep smiling :) peace

[Naina]

Very nice one Avanthika... Its really good... Life is really not happily ever after its full of complications... and i really liked the last para especially... Keep writing..:)

[Avanthika]

thank you so much for reviewing , realy happy to see you liked my work.

[Naina]

.........:))

[amrit]

its all about the mind sets though , but i loved the way its written . i hope this not the way u actually live , enjoy the roller coaster :)

[Avanthika]

once again thanks for reading

[Mazie]

This ca be very true in some situations. I think there can be a happy ending, but not the eprfect ending as we all were lead to believe as children growing up. The thing is it never ends, so when we see stories, they end while it is still on the good note, and after that, when thins don;t go right, people think things are over because it is not the perfect story ending.
I think this is a great piece ! very thought-provoking

[Avanthika]

am so glad you liked it , thank you frnd :)

[Dannyisawriter]

Loved.It!!! I'm not going to lie, I was expecting a cheesy love poem or something by the title but I like how it wasn't that at all :D

[Avanthika]

thank you so much writer :)

[Ashira Macy]

Happily ever after implies the end of a story, but we are all still in the process of writing ours, so I think you are right, there is only such a thing as to be continued.

[Avanthika]

Thanks Ashira your review is valuable .

[Lyan]

I get what you mean by your poem that things are portrayed to us as always ending happy ever after. But in life it is not always going to be the happily ever after. However I think in life we should understand that things may not turn happily ever after but still hope for the better^_^

[Avanthika]

you got it excatly :)

[Angad Waraich]

I mean i get what you are trying to convey but it fells like its missing something.
A little tweaks and editing could definitely help the integrity of the poem.

And there may not be any happy endings now but sooner or later everyone finds peace.

Thank You.
-Angad

[Avanthika]

Thank you Angad:) i am wrkng on that

[Mayank]

I liked the examples you have used here, the life we face in a reality and the one which we see or read...

[Avanthika]

:) thanks mayank

[Penny]

I dont know.. it is a good poem but it started out great and I thought it would be a masterpiece but it didn't turn out so. Still its good poem.. and rhyming is good too.

[Avanthika]

will work on that to make my next a masterpiece :)

[Penny]

Insha allah..