ONE HAND

ONE HAND

A Story by Avalon Cole Hive
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This is a story about an extraordinary woman who faces adversity in prehistoric times. Her courage and resilience inspire us all

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ONE HAND




Jebel Irhoud


Morocco


Around 300000 BC



The air condensed the lights of the sun, when it circulated


between the petals of the flowers. A melody of perfumes


spread across the region.


The butterflies collected the nectar while the ladybirds


explored the myriads of possibilities that the terrain


offered them. Gradually, the colours faded in the sky


letting the first constellations of stars shined in a beaming


glow. It was at this precise moment that Hina was born.


Her mother wept when she first saw her because of her


congenital malformation; Hina had no right hand, and


only four fingers on the left one.


In this harsh climate, a disabled girl from birth would


struggle to survive. The temperature differences between


day and night were so drastic that only the fittest were


capable of handling these conditions.



Hina would need all her abilities to gather the fruits and


help the community with the necessary labour required of


her.




Jinna her mother told her father Omma that Hina was


sick, and would probably die soon. Since the first months


of her pregnancy, Jinna had not been in a very good


health. She felt early on that something was wrong. The


birth of her daughter confirmed her worst premonitions.



Jinna thought that Hina could be a burden, and she


would probably be ostracized in the tribe.


Jinna felt so desperate by the situation that she decided


to go to the nearby river with the intention of drowning her


baby and telling afterwards that it was an accident.


But something in Hina sensed that her life was in danger,


and she cried and screamed so vigorously that Jinna had


remorse about what she initially wanted to do.


A feeling of compassion and love for her baby timidly


emerged like a gentle spirit who was watching over her.


From now on, she would protect her child the best she


could. There was something special that she could not


explain which emanated from Hina that had a fierce


appetite to live.



Each step of growing up for Hina was a challenge.


It started by the other women in the tribe who complained


that she was too slow, and she was not a real help for


them.


Jinna always replied that she would work twice as hard to


compensate what Hina could not contribute. Jinna was in


constant fear for her. She always used to tell Hina to stay


where she could see her.


In this network of caves tightly embedded in the hills, you


had to be extra vigilant.


The life in the tribe was hard, you had to move often to


avoid predators like snakes and leopards.



You also had to be very wary of the other tribes in the


area who never missed an occasion to attack to either


steal your food or to assert their predominance.


Two people in the tribe were always assigned to give the


alert if something threatened the integrity of the clan. It


was not rare that the tribe had to mourn the loss of three


to five warriors per year.


Somehow, with discipline and repetition, Hina managed


to develop a dexterity to pick up fruits.


But it had been an upheaval battle. Climbing between the


branches was particularly tricky for her.


In the beginning, the other children use to mock and bully


her because she was different.


Her only friend was her cousin Hine, he was kind and


supportive.


He helped her to develop unique skills to gather what the


tribe needed. After years of practice and determination,


Hina became the best girl to collect fruits. Everybody was


amazed by her achievement.


Jinna was more confident about the future of her unique


child. Maybe she could make it after all.


One year a locust swarm devastated the region.


The tribe had less to rely on.


Hina decided against her mother orders to venture further


that the group of women used to go without being seen.


When she was exploring the wilderness around the cave,


she came face to face with a leopard.


The beast stared at her, but something told her to remain


calm, and she had the presence of mind to grab a rock


and to throw at the leopard’s head.


After that she ran to rejoin the cave. When she told her


story, her mother was very angry because she


disobeyed, but many people in the tribe thought that she


made it up, and they laughed at her.


Hina was the source of constant jokes. They teased her


every day.


Jinna was ashamed and told her to never tell this story


again. Hina did not care that nobody believed her, she


used that as confirmation that she was more courageous


than most people. Leopard attacks were what people


feared the most.



Hina continued to secretly explore the area near the


caves. Jinna kept calling for her to know where she was.


Hina always had an excuse ready to give her mother.


During her excursions, Hina learned about different


aspects of the surroundings.


She was also very observant of was going on in the tribe.


Even though it was unusual for a girl, she asked her


father Omma how he fabricated spears, and how to


select the best rocks to do it.


When she was around ten year old, she asked her cousin


Hine to show her how to hunt preys.


I can’t show you that, it’s only for the men, you know


that.” said Hine.


But every time she could, from a distance, she liked to


see how the hunters ran long distances to make their


prey tired and finally exhausted before they killed them.


During these hunts you had to be very careful to avoid


the lions, they could launch a surprise attack at any time.


Recently, one man died like this.


Hina reached adolescence, it was time for her to marry.


Her uncle Jime who was the tribal chief had to select the


best suitor for her.


But unexpectedly, something strange happened before


she could marry.



Without understanding why, people in the tribe started to


fall ill. Maybe it was something in the food they ate. But


one by one they felt weak.




The symptoms of the disease ranged from severe


rashes, vomiting or other intestinal problems followed by


enormous fatigue and the need to sleep long hours. The


healer of the tribe used medicinal plants that he knew


could alleviate the pain.



Both of Hina’s parents suffered from the disease but by


miracle she did not get it. She was very worried for them.


She accompanied the healer to collect the plants. He


taught her the best to use. Because the healer was so


busy, Hina became his assistant.


After a massive fever some people died of the disease.


Most of the men were affected by the sickness.


What was unimaginable before became a reality.


Because so few men could hunt, it had been decided that


Hine would show Hina how to hunt in order to provide


more food for the recovery of those who were not in the


condition to attend their duties.


Hina was now one of the few able bodies capable of


performing what was necessary to bring meat to the tribe.


But even diminished, many men protested against the


idea of incorporating Hina in a hunt. They said that it


would bring more bad luck, the gods were already angry


against them.


Jime the chief stood firm, and he said to them that there


was no choice if the tribe wanted to survive.


The first hunts, Hina was tentative. She did not master


the right timing to throw the spears at the preys.



But Hine always encouraged her, and after many


attempts she managed to kill a prey. She was totally


elated.


Her mother’s health did not improve. Jinna passed away


few weeks after she had the first symptoms. Hina and her


father were totally heartbroken and inconsolable.


After three months, new calamities afflicted the tribe. It


was the beginning of the most severe drought that they


had known for years. The main sources of water


diminished in size to become small pounds.


The tribe had to move to find a more a welcoming place.


Jime decided to send Hina and Hine to prospect the area


to find somewhere they could use to build a settlement


around it.




It was an arduous mission because of the scarcity of food


and water, but they were now the only two people who


had the fortitude to do it.


Hina remembered that her mother always told her to


follow her intuition, so they headed west.


They walked for days but could not find any large source


of water.


During their search, they ran across two men from a rival


tribe who tried to attack them and to rape Hina. Like


possessed by the devil, Hine and Hina managed to


severely injured the men, and they fled the fastest they


could.


Two days after, a huge desert storm appeared.


Hina and Hine had to stay under a rock to wait that it


passed. They kept walking to the west. After one more


day of marching, they finally saw something they had


never seen before, it was like an infinite river. They tasted


the water, it was a strange sensation, they did not like it


when they tried to drink it. They roamed around the


shore.


They found a river and also a large lake.


Hina and Hine were so happy, this place was perfect to


establish a new settlement. They admired the warmth of


the colours on the horizon above the waves just before


sunset.


Because Hine was an expert to follow animal tracks, he


had an exceptional sense of orientation and a very good


memory. They rested two days to regenerate. They


started their journey back to the tribe.


After one week, against all odds, they reached their


destination.





When they arrived and announced that they had found


the best place to settle, it was an immense celebration.


The tribe started their long march to reach their new


homeland.


They established a new community near the sea.


They learned how to collect the seashells and the difficult


art of fishing.


Hina married a strong and courageous man.


She became a mother then a grandmother.


She had a long and happy life. She was the matriarch of


the tribe. At night, around the fire, she told the story of


her life to the children.


She always finished her stories by saying:” Follow your


heart, it’s the best guide you will ever have.”




© 2020 Avalon Cole Hive


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Avalon Cole Hive
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