Hmmm...haven't thought about that yet

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I still haven't forgotten
Even if it was many years ago
How we built our love
And i know its never gonna go...

The things we did
The things we said
Those feelings still aren't dead

I know you've probably forgotten by now
But I just can't help wondering
What it could've been like
If we made it through

I lay awake in bed
Thinking over what I should've said
Why you walked away
And how I wished you'd stay

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

yes, the final verse sums it up nicely....you are young and if you continue to write you'll find out how to make this better than it is.....in that the final verse you say so much in so few lines with a sublime simplicity

[Evanora les Elise]

Oh! Thank you very much!

[Sharon]

Great. I like it.I like the last stanza, "I lay awake in bed Thinking over what I should've said Why you walked away And how I wished you'd stay" This also brings back "memories" Great job expressing your ideas.

[Evanora les Elise]

Thank you!

[Sharon]

Your welcome :)