White Rabbit, White Rabbit

This was made for an older OC of mine, I always enjoyed it. Unedited old one.

White rabbit,
White rabbit,
Come out and play.

Come now child,
Let’s play a game.
Let’s go a little wild,
What’s the shame?

Just you and me,
Let’s start our game,
Come now, hurry!
We’ll play all the same.

Out of the dark,
Into the light.
Make a little spark,
Likes the starts at night!

Like our own wonderland,
We will laugh so loud,
Come on lets go,
Take my hand, your allowed.

We will drink our tea,
Out in the sun,
By the bight shining sea.
It’s so much fun!

White rabbit,
White rabbit,
Come out and play.

Just you and me,
Always young,
And  free.
Our joy will forever be sung.

Now my dear white rabbit,
You will always play with me,
Lets make this a habit,
To always stay happy….

Reviews

[Gregory Hill]

Ok very nice as ussual! The one thing i noticed was the line Likes the starts at night! did you mean to say like the stars at night? or such If it is right it was hard to understand. Other then that i dont have any criticisms great jo keep up the good work.