Desdemona's tale

Love is suffocated if held too tightly love is faith but when it is tainted its color gets faint real love never cheats real cheats never love...

Desdemona's Tale

 

Innocence is often convicted

Falsehood is often depicted

Love knows no adultery

It can't be won with bribery

Coming out of the shadows

Directly into the spotlight

To speak or not to speak

Feelings inside heart have to fight

Ages change, times change, days change

All but change is constant

Every thing changes but love remains

To fall in love it happens in a second

Love is often the one

It is followed by the world

Even by reluctance, the lust, the envy

And not to mention by the remorse

Suspicions kill the love

No one can deny it

Heard that 'Nothing can kill the love'

Then how suspicions can destroy it?

To know the answer,

Another Desdemona has to take birth

From hell's cries or heaven's mirth

Need to comeback on the earth

And create another fateful tale

Desdemona's tale.

Author's Note

my first attempt on online writing. Please criticise staunchly as I want to develop my writing at it's best. Please Read and Review.

Reviews

[Dalebear]

Awesome poem, the rhythm and flow nice keep up the good work

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the word "Desdemona". A powerful poem. Love may disappear. But the memory stays with us forever like you said in your words. The poem made some strong and powerful statements.
"Suspicions kill the love
No one can deny it"
A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Vyctm]

A great love poem. This is my favorite of the three you have posted. The rhythm is very attractive and the flow is steady. For your first attempt at online writing you did a great job. Keep writing.