When I meet you

When I meet you

A Poem by Jordan Smith

Dear destiny,


When I meet you
on that fateful day
there will be no question

When I meet you
under a beautiful night sky
the stars will align

When I meet you
on our first date
your smile will shine brightest

When I meet you
on our first road trip
your personality will sing loudest

When I meet you
in our first argument
your love will scream loudest

When I meet you
with our first hand hold
your confidence will be known

When I meet you
in our first embrace
your warmth will spread through all

When I meet you
and i'm on my knee
there will be only one question

When I meet you
from our first kiss
your lips will seal our love

When I meet you
on that fateful day
there will be no question

You will be the one I marry
for better or for worse,
in sickness and in health

'til death do us part
for as long as we
both shall live.


Signed,

Fate

© 2019 Jordan Smith


Author's Note

Jordan Smith
I wrote this poem as a letter. Not my usual writing style, but I figured I could change it up a little and try something new. Let me know what you think about it!

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A unique read, I liked the letter styling from Fate to Destiny.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jordan Smith

2 Months Ago

Thank you Jessalynn. I appreciate it! This was one I remember being really proud of back in the day .. read more
I didn't know quite what to make of this. Is it you embracing your destiny? Or given the signature, is it a fateful meeting between and destiny? If so, what is the outcome? Or is it a description of a fated romance?
Or am I missing the point entirely?

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on February 12, 2019
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Jordan Smith
Jordan Smith

Houston, TX



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28-year old former poet trying to maybe get back into the world of writing. Slowly trying to find that part of me again while healing my heart. more..

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