Broken

Broken Hearted

Broken Souled

The Heart wants to heal

The Mind does not

Separation threatens the family

Confusion looms over it

Clarity unknown

Logic out the window

The Sun starts to shine

just a bit brighter now,

things are looking u

Hearts start to rebuild

Parents get along,

fall in love again

Apologize for what almost occurred.

All is well

in the family

Then, the curve ball

gets thrown,

The rug pulled out form underneath you

You watch as

your father, the one person

that is suppose to

show you what

commitment really means

leaves.

He leaves a family

confused,

hurt,

and betrayed.

Broken Hearts

Broken Souled

The Heart can not Heal

The Mind rejects what occurred

The family divided

Their lives forever changed

Author's Note

Sorry that I haven't been writing and posting in a while. Happy New Year to everyone! Review this one and rate please! Thank You for reading my work.

Reviews

[A Humble Poet]

That was so beautiful, I could feel the emotion and great break in every word. Absolutely wonderful!

One thing... In the third segment in the third line I believe that you meant to say "up" but you just said "u"

Minor error, no biggie :) I really love you work though! Full ratings!

[Jordan Smith]

Thank you for your review :) I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. Oh yeah, I'll have to go and fix that. Thanks for telling me.

[Kira]

That is amazing. Personally a favorite. Very real considering I've been here.

[Brittany Bostic]

Developing a hurtful yet basic idea into real life situations. At some point many of us have to get our heart broken by someone or maybe we are the heartbreakers ourselves. I love the line, "The Heart wants to heal"

[Jordan Smith]

Thank You for the comment :)

[zaisham9393]

I loved this.Very emotional.Thanks for sharing :))!

[Angela Sparks]

I love it. Thanks for sharing. I love the use of repeating so.e of the lines, and the words and tune just flowed together. Thanks again for sharing this c:it's so wonderful

[SheIsMe]

Awww Jordan! Talk to me. My heart aches for you...

[Ruth]

This is a painful truth to many, a heartfelt purge and one that reminds the reader how vulnerable we really all are...

[zunie frost]

hello !! Jordan . is good to see you again . it's been a while since i heard from you !!
how are you ?
ok now back to the poetry ! your poem is so great i have a hysterical time reading it !! every words have a deep heartfelt touch !! thanks for sending me the request ! full ratings as always

[Jordan Smith]

Thank you for the review Zunie! I am doing better now in life. Sorry this response is 2 years late lol How are you doing?

[zunie frost]

I'm good. No problem friend

[ExquisiteEyes]

This poem reflects the confused and bewildered state of mind. The emotions are expressed in a very raw form.
I hope you are okay...

[Jordan Smith]

Thank You for your concern. I appreciate it alot.

[Kathryn Smith]

Oh Jordan. This is rough. I hope you're okay. Very well written and made. Don't you love how we can pour emotions out into writing and then we feel a bit better? Hopefully your father turns around real soon. :)
Cheers! x

[Jordan Smith]

Thank You so much Kathryn :) That really means alot to me