Confusion

Controlled by mixed emotions

Only to realize that you're not sure what you really want

Neglecting is your Brain

Feeling is your Heart

Unfortunately, you can't figure out which is right

Saddened by this, you

Isolate yourself

Only to realize your mistake of

Neglecting with your heart and feeling with your brain

Author's Note

Please comment below on what you think about this one. I really appreciate the feedback.

Reviews

[Maddi]

the ending of this is very clever. amazing poetry here

[Jordan Smith]

Thank you Maddi! I really appreciate the critique. Also, thank you for choosing me as the winner of your contest! I was not expecting to win honestly.

[bigfootprint]

You have confusion figured out. You give us a gem, identifiable with everyone who has ever had mixed emotions. The exposition is poignant and context are brief but poignant. Favorite line"Saddened by this, you isolate yourself..." keep it up.

[Jordan Smith]

Thank you bigfootprint! I really do appreciate the review!

[¿]

The only thing that can help in between confusion of heart and brain is to get skilled at the usage of these....but that also costs penalty of betrayal and success to define who's right at which time...brain or heart!
Twax amazing read!☺

[Brittany Bostic]

I love the last line and how it brought in the other lines in the poem. I think often people are unsure of what they want and when they make the decision it is too late.

[Rosaliine]

I like this, especially the last line :) good work :)

[terry smith]

The heart supplies the brain with oxygen and a rhythm...what does the brain do, wander off...we are all confused thats why I flip a coin. nice poem Jordan

[KeiseRaven]

We really cannot stand the bickering of our heart and mind.

I think you should change "your" to "you're" in the line "Only to realize that your not sure what you really want"

Keep it up!

[Anna]

Pretty good. I liked the ending. :)

[Evelyn Storm]

You summed up perfectly how confusion is internal conflict.

[SheIsMe]

I like the yoda-esque nature of the feelings. Makes it unique and memorable. I really liked this.