Rejection

This was just published in the Inkling Creative Arts 2016 Magazine Volume 26 at Lone Star College-Tomball.

Rejection

The Mind can adjust

The Bones can replenish

But the Heart

Can Not Rebuild

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

thanks for entry into my 5 lines and under with meaning comp
i love this
i believe the heart can rebuild with the right love support and faith
it may never be the same exactly still broken but beating on a stronger different drum
this makes me think of the bee gees song "how can u mend a broken heart"
well done thanks for entry into my 5 lines under comp

[Jordan Smith]

Thank you for your review & I was glad that I could enter it into your contest :)

[Bayli]

I really liked this one, it hit some feels.

[Jenna Kay]

I feel this way for both rejection and loss. The heart can try to rebuild, but there will always be pieces missing. Lovely work :)

[SheIsMe]

The heart can never remain as it once was. Good job.

[Priscilla Sayers]

Ah I beg to differ the heart rebuilds though the scars remain
Even the fissures, the small tears can cover a heart but still
It beats
Still it fights to keep
Beating

[Anna]

Short but sweet. A very true statement you have made.