Rejection

This was just published in the Inkling Creative Arts 2016 Magazine Volume 26 at Lone Star College-Tomball.

Rejection

The Mind can adjust

The Bones can replenish

But the Heart

Can Not Rebuild

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

thanks for entry into my 5 lines and under with meaning comp
i love this
i believe the heart can rebuild with the right love support and faith
it may never be the same exactly still broken but beating on a stronger different drum
this makes me think of the bee gees song "how can u mend a broken heart"
well done thanks for entry into my 5 lines under comp

[Jordan Smith]

Thank you for your review & I was glad that I could enter it into your contest :)

[Gee]

Resilient us humans, the heart mends but the mind never forgets,once bitten....

[Jordan Smith]

I'm glad you enjoyed it Gee!

[¿]

Heart is constructed in such way that if broken once never gonna be back at place again....Almighty's tremendous creation!
Always take care of your heart we should..☺

[Jordan Smith]

Thanks for the review Tahsin.Z! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[¿]

You're heartedly welcome :)

[Christina]

I'm always a little envious of those who can express so much in so few words. I can feel the pain in this every time I read it, and that's just my style.

[Jordan Smith]

Thank You Christina :) I'm really glad you enjoyed this one.

[M]

this is probably the best thing i've ever read on rejection. so short but you couldn't have said it any better

[Jordan Smith]

Thank You Madeline :) I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Hey, could you by chance review my "Helpless" poem and tell me what you think about that? I might be doing a workshop with that poem at school.

[Scarch]

Reality ! How to heal the heart then :(

[Writer_next_door]

Short and sweet, but it gets the message across perfectly! Well done.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Ahh yes it does hurt to be rejected and it is hard to adjust sometimes ^^ but cheer up, it does get better over time, we just got to learn not to dwell in the past and look forward to new opportunities (I have to remind myself this as well lol)

[Insight "MH"]

A lovely write. The heart takes a lot of time to regain some of its strength after a blow, but even if it recovers, there will be scars. Thank you for sharing this fine piece.


Insight.

[passionberry]

Great job i like. Keep writing 😊