Alone

I am driving alone on this road,

It’s unfair and bumpy,

Still,

I am riding for you!

 

I have a fort which is captured by dark,

It’s evil and horrendous,

Still,

I am standing for you!

 

I am rowing a boat with a hole in it,

It’s dangerous and scary,

Still,

I am rowing for you!

 

Someone is beating me,

It’s trying to kill me,

I know it will,

Still,

I am trying to survive for you!

 

I am alone,

I am weak,

I am wiped out,

But still, 

I am waiting for you!

 

--Amay Saxena

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

Emotions flowing all around....
i like the way you represent the thoughts, carrying me somewhere you don't know...
This is so relatable...
You won't believe I was weeping when I read this piece.... You may not know how this affects me... but it highly does....
Keep writing... long way to go....
Nice poem... about loneliness...
i too write on this topic frequently...
All the best !
Anindita

[Amay Saxena]

Thank you!

[Anindita Janhabee]

I have just read your blog posts...
They're really good .. The topics you've mentioned are also nice...
Indians' thoughts aren't similar anyway... Distinction prevails .. Yet, surviving peacefully with such distinction should be our aim...
very good writings...
Surprised to see someone thinking like me, in terms of Diwali, I didn't burst any cracker this yr. My friend lives near a slum area so I asked him to gift the children with crackers... because he stays alone so I asked him to enjoy his Diwali with those innocents... It was good spreading happiness he said....
I always see for helping others... and yeah, I've been getting problems doing that too!! still I do!!!

[Amay Saxena]

Staying happy. Spreading happiness and making our lives meaningful, should be our aim. Whereas, everyone has their own point of view. But changing the mindset of the people is my aim. I want India to be a better place because to an extend it is messed up! Change in a positive manner, I meant.

[Amay Saxena]

By the way, Thank you for your compliment even though I don't deserve so much of it. Thank you.

[Anindita Janhabee]

You do deserve appreciation...
My pleasure...
I hope you'll like my works too..