Eden

Eden

Anger is a little boy in a ripped jacket

Who plays tag with Stability too close to the edge of a cliff.

Confusion is a child with tangled hair and a purple shirt,

Who enjoys running circles around Content

Turning her flower crowns into razor blades.

Depression is a pale girl with the saddest of eyes

Who plays Red Light Green Light with Happiness

Near that old garden that they called Eden

But lately seems to be dying.

Reviews

[Onlyme]

Exceptional write, articulate, quick drawn in flow and write, relatable and true. Can't get any better than that. Heartfelt and passionate.

[Austin_Meehan]

Than you so much! Is there anything that you would change? Also, feel free to take a peek at my other works and I'll gladly look at yours! Cheers!

[Onlyme]

Christ No. this is perfect. You are articulate, clever, thought- provoking and seek the truth. I like this a lot. This is just my mere opinion obviously.

[Austin_Meehan]

Well, thank you for your opinion and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Onlyme]

I sure did, enjoy it. Thanks, for sharing Austin.

[Austin_Meehan]

No problem Dawn!

[Starr]

Oh wow! truly well expressed and flowed wonderful. love the deep meaning I got with this. Awesome write here.

[Austin_Meehan]

Thank you again and if you find anything that should be changed just let me know! I'm open to criticism and your thoughts.