Breathe

Breathe

A Poem by LupiLuv

Hold me in your heart,
Torn asunder in your arms,
I have played my part,
And come into harm.

Hold me in your mind,
Cover up my misty eyes,
Before I'm left behind
Alone with your sweet lies.

I haven't lived in years,
Breath gone still.
You are my ultimate fear,
But I'll breathe my fill.

Touch my barren soul,
My remains of memories,
Cast me into the cold,
Darkness sickly shimmering.

Touch my weary head,
Drag me down to sleep,
Your hand in mine,
For I am yours to keep.

I haven't lived in years,
Breath gone still.
You are my ultimate fear,
But I will breathe my fill
Until you've broken
My last loving breath..

© 2014 LupiLuv


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Hello LuvPaige; Great write my friend, Great Love letter, The Heart loves who the heart Loves, it can not be helped, Even if it means love through the pain... I been addicted to anothers Love, needed it, even though should not, still loved her, was worse without her, that's how it is I'm told when a Sagittarius Loves, its unconditional, even if its the death o' me... Need more like this my friend: Eddie / deadwolf

Posted 10 Years Ago


Someone threatens to take the life out of you huh?... and yet I sense you are willing to hang in there...perhaps not by conscious thought

Posted 10 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Are you asking death for a lover?

Posted 10 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LupiLuv

10 Years Ago

No, it was more about loving someone who is destructive. As in being "loved" by that person would be.. read more
Tom Lumsden

10 Years Ago

So someone who is like death is your lover and it sounds to me like you are self-destructive as "I w.. read more
LupiLuv

10 Years Ago

Yes, that's about the size of it.
The title is deceiving since you can hardly breath in your poem, but I guess there's a message right there. An effective read of being smothered by a significant other, nicely pen'd.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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