Star Bound

May 28


Let's all float up into the air

Fly around without a care

Keep the world spinning and alive

We can travel closer to the sun

When it gets hot we will run 

Through the stars and the planets

Let's all go swimming in outer space

Spin around, nothing to keep us down

Let's all go where we have never been

Explore this life on a whim

See the world like an astronaut 

Pick it up like a marble on the floor

We can trade it for a candy in a store

And let's all float up In the air

We can fly around without a care

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

etherial feel to this one and yet it feels a little earth bound and forced. Not as natural as some of your other pieces.

[Austin Skye Elsborg]

What do you mean by earthbound and forced? This one was written with more thought then usual. I usually just let it flow out without thinking about it.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Well sometimes the best works are simply those that flow from our emotions.

[Austin Skye Elsborg]

Yeah I agree. It's difficult for me to write when I don't have good inspiration and let it flow more.