Daydreams

dreaming of travels and adventures.

Living in between the lines
Dwelling in closely knit spaces
Gazing out the window
Dreaming of far away places
Thinking of all the faces
The people you'd meet 
Wondering about the paths 
Laying at your feet
Which way to go
What memories you will have to keep
Sitting at home
Waiting for your tea to steep
Thinking as dreamily 
As though you were asleep. 

Author's Note

Lets all go to Italy!! By the by, you should ignore half the things I put in my author's notes. Unless the inspire you to comment! :)

Reviews

[poeticpiers]

Do you ever write in formal style? you have a talent but do not seem to understand that meter is essential to make your words flow smoothly read aloud

[Austin Skye Elsborg]

I have started trying to branch out my style and write sonnets, haikus and explore with meter. Hopefully I will get some of the up here soon, and I would love to hear your thoughts!

[poeticpiers]

May I suggest a good source book Miller Williams Patterns of poetry explains the various meter available in great detail.
We all have room for improvement and can learn from each other

[Austin Skye Elsborg]

Sweet! I will have to go check the out. Thank you very much. There is definitely always room to improve! I hope you keep reading my writing. :)