The Last Leaf of the Dying Tree

i like it

Plucking the last leaf of the dying tree
I say goodbye, give it all peace
But sew it to my heart where it will stay
As a reminder of a tree that was not meant to be

Her fruits so sour
Leaves crumpled and dry
Seeds of no promise
On dying wood it thrives

No real foundation
It was bound to die
I just let it erode away
Just let it all die

So I pluck the last leaf of the dying tree
In remembrance to me off thee

Author's Note

i liked it opinions please

Reviews

[Jon]

This is awsome, god job.

[Lilly]

I agree - I like this too. Very well written - I like the flow of it.
Great job.

[Allison]

i like this a lot!!!!!! Awesome job!!!!!!!

[Prateeksha Khot]

i liked it. keep it up !

[MagiCrystal]

Good one.. x0x0x

[Moth Phoenix]

I liked it a lot.
It's a really intense poem hun.
It has a very deep meaning!!
Keep on writing =]]

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was really good. I liked it too. :)
Awesome.
Nice write. Thanks for sharing :)