Bird and The Bee

eh heh mehh

I’m pushing on

Trying to make you see

I’m the only one you need

 

Just look past the reflection in the glass

And cut deep into me to see the love I bleed

 

An extra beat my heart gets

When I speak with thee

Blood pumping harder as I rip open my skin

And dig around playing surgeon

Ripping out my heart

Wrap it with a bow

Present it to you

For you to hold

 

Forget about the rest

I’ll treat you the best

The way you deserve to be

Like a queen on a pedestal

And I as your king

Giving you gifts of all the sky’s majesties

 

A perfect match we would be

Like the bird and the bee

Me as your bird

And you my sweet little bee

 

A perfect match we would be

If only you could see

I really want thee

To be with me

Reviews

[Rachael]

It's cute; a little love story. Flowed well and the last stanza did a good job of tying it all together. Nice poem.

[Avoiry]

This is very sweet and i like the flow of the piece as it all blends together nicely and wraps the topic up in a bow. Deliverance and adoration and a literal presentation of heart , did i mention i love " Digging around to play surgeon" Very nice love .

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Good write.

[Cody Wiggins]

Getting better and better everyday

[Ashley Black]

"Me as your bird

And you my sweet little bird"

did you mean my sweet little bee there???

otherwise it was really good

[Eye0fthebeh0lder]

I liked this, it was well written and clearly thought out without being too complicated. Nice work.

[Moth Phoenix]

=]
I like it... a lot!!!!! ^_^