Butterflies

Butterflies

A Poem by Hippy
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You make the butterflies fly high

When you just say hi

You bring a tear to my eye

When you have to say goodbye

A thought of you makes my stomach turn

And for you is who I yearn

I beg to see your cute smile everyday

One day I hope I may

Just to kiss your lips

While I hold your hips

Would give me the perfect day

For I love you is all I can say

© 2010 Hippy


Author's Note

Hippy
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I like this poem. The gentle description and the hope of a sweet kiss and holding a woman. Ain't no better poem. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


babe i read it again and it made me smile and tear up ^_^
i love u so much!!!! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


that's how i feel about someone :) awesome peom, i could relate

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Jon
Good flow and packed with emotion, great job..

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is so cute. I can see and feel your emotions in your words. Great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is soooo sweet! Any girl would be very lucky for this to be about her. Wonderful job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


very sweet and nicely written. wonderful job =-)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Such a sweet poem. Great work :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Good rhyming. It's really good for it's a love poem. Good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Awwwwwwwww ^_^
I love this one!! Hmmm lemme take a minute to guess who this is about...... alright got it in my head hehehe :]]
Great job!!

I like,
Just to kiss your lips
While I hold your hips

:]

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Hippy
Hippy

Underland, IN



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My names austin lee wallace i am a hippy and thats what they all call me. i love music its the greatest, i play guitar the harp piano flute violin and whatever i can get me hands on. Im not much of a .. more..

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