Meaning

my thoughts on why we are here could be bordom lol its probly much deeper tho i think this scratches the surface tho

Just being light isn’t enough

We have to have some meaning

Some cause

Sure we could sit in the spirit and heal

But the soul would grow board of one plane

It wants a cause

To merge itself with conciseness

To manifest itself in a physical world

 

But the soul cant be confined to one world

It wishes to flow between

Hints a meaning for death

But lets take death out of the equation

Say we learn to flow concisely

Or should I say unconcisely

wouldn’t there be no need for death

wouldn’t this be eternal life

 

But no one conciseness must grow boring

Deaths essential for a good life

For many lives

For many lessons

For a fun life

Author's Note

comments idea on expanding on what i got

Reviews

[victoria]

this was really good. actually, i dont think you should make it any longer, i like the length it is right now. you know, so many people try so hard to find a meaning, to know why we are here, while i do wonder about it sometimes, i feel bad for the poeple who obsess over it. they are missing out on every day life, which is the best part of life. it would do everyone good just to live in the moment sometimes xD haha great write :D

[MagiCrystal]

A good poem with life.. yes.. write for you.. and let's us feel your passion..
I love it

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was a good write. You should expand it. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Jessica]

Great write :) I like it.

[Ian]

yes everthing must have a meaning right good poem that tries to connect with the reader

[Keevan]

good write. i liked it :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This was a beautiful vacation into the realms of the unconscious.
Sweet trip.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

wow, this is beautiful

[AllyKinzz:)]

Death fun?
Not so much.

But good piece.

[NoAirToBreatheXSuffocat..]

i could totoally feel the emotion so beautfil dude