Staring at Our Shoes

its when i stared at my shoes and i thought of her which crosses my mind all the time

As I sit here

Staring at our shoes

I see one

Deep in the blue

Alone

The other up high

On a pillar

Towering toward the sky

One is the right

The other

Is the left

Separate

Nothing is solved

Together

All is resolved

Allowing us to walk

Together

On both our feet

Out into the blue

The beautiful sea

Where together

Forever

We shall be

Drifting together in harmony

For all eternity

Author's Note

Reviews pls and even on your opinion of what you get from it

Reviews

[Myk Malice]

it reminds me of the shoegazing era of rock, you could put this to music and have a wonderful folk song on your hands. (ala dylan). keep on space truckin'.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

what a great correlation between a pair of shoes and love as a partnership.

[Bette]

this is great, tow is better than one, the "shoes" are nothing with out each other.

[QuietPoet]

Beautiful piece of writing. I like it.

[MagiCrystal]

We all write as we pleased.. so I will say it..
This is reality...pure, and a thing we all have done.. so
I like it.. and it's flawless but ....that is just me!

[Sean M. Addams]

great job on this...your talent really shows through on this piece..awesome job on this!!!

[Moth Phoenix]

awwww so sweet =]
I really liked it :D
It flowed very nicely and I see some rhyming, made it flow even better in my opinion.

[Soul Magic✯]

awesome expression. your flow was tight on point. wonderful talent as always

[MissWordSmith]

i like it. the understanding of how two totally different elements can come together and make one perfect compound!~

[Subjective Sanity]

I think it's beautiful. To me, it speaks of soulmates. I'm adding it to my favorites.