My Wave of Love

how i feel for her

Our souls intertwined

To redefine

This essence we feel

But won’t say

This essence called love

Why is it so strong?

Or am I just wrong

The only way to see

Is to breathe

These words I fear to say

            Oh how I wish there was a better way

            To wash you with this wave

            This wave of love

Author's Note

reviews pls and enjoy

Reviews

[Hippy's Sister]

aww, brother(: thats so cute.

[Katie]

lovely little write. pure emotions are the greatest! :)

[Subjective Sanity]

It's beautiful and sweet. Well done!

[Lilly]

Lovely, sweet poem. Great emotions in this.

[The Perfectionist]

If you're going to have a question mark after one question, you should have one after both the questions. Also, you may or may not want to add a comment between 'Oh' and 'how' near the end.

Love poems are hard to review because it's pretty impossible to be original in either writing it or reviewing it. It's cliche, but not to the point that it gets irritating. There's nothing really wrong with this; I think the girl would like it.

[MoonlitAngel]

I can so relate to this at the moment. I love it. Thanks for writing it. I really needed to read something like this. >.< Lol.

--Blood

[Moth Phoenix]

awwww very sweet hun =]

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

very romantic piece . i wish someone felt this way for me, great write

[Bette]

aww, your a romantic at heart. well done

[The Last Poetic King]

I enjoyed this bro, and I think [maybe wrong] who you wrote this for. Keep it up, feel those emotions.