Carved on this Tree for Eternity 2

this is the secound one that completes the AW and AE carved in this tree for eternity read em both so you can understand

Now I burn

Your name

From this tree

Leaving me

To stay for eternity

Alone

Til she comes along

To carve a new name

In this tree

Bonding

Me and her

For the next

Eternity

Author's Note

this is the secound one that completes the AW and AE carved in this tree for eternity read em both so you can understand
and give your opinions

Reviews

[The Last Poetic King]

It makes sense man, but I know why you do such things. You won't admit it, but I am sure you loved her. I've had my own tree so to speak, and I carved the names into them too. Except I never burnt the others name, more or so I burnt my own. I can reflect from these pieces, good work bro. Keep it up

[DBURKE]

I really love this. I read the first one and Loved that one as well but the continuation was fire. I love how it was short and to the point but even more how you explained heartbreak, anger, and hope all in one poem. great work!

[AllyKinzz:)]

Short .. but most good poems are short... short and sweet, like this one, good job.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

love it, great write

[Lilly]

very nice piece - emotion and imagery in this is great

[Undying Glory]

interesting work, and i agree, it's really cute...

[Keevan]

wonderfully amazing :-D i like your writing!

[Bette]

this is wonderful.

[Moth Phoenix]

deep man very deep and I love it =]

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awww this is cute. :)) hehehe