Dig up the Coffin Just to put it Back in its Grave

I dont think it has much rhyme but it flows from my heart idk if its any good but the write helped me

Just who does this help

You say its for the best

The best for who

I can say it must only help you

 

I want what’s best for you

Even if you don’t think it’s me

I tried my best for you

With every chance that I got

 

I was so kind to you

Put you on a pedestal

Ripped my heart out for you

Mounted it on a ring

Treated you just like a queen

 

That’s when you said

“I think we should see someone else”

But I cant see anyone else

I’m blinded by you

 

You tore me apart

Sent me spiraling backwards

You was the air I breathed

The light that pushed me through

The hand the pulled me up

Out of this grave I dug

 

Now your burying me

In the grave you pulled me out of

You put the stake right through my heart

Putting this dead man back to slumber

 

You said this love would last

Now you bury it along with me

 

There is no other

That could love me

The way you did

No girl could look past this face

And see this huge heart

The way you did

Leaving me alone

In this cold, dark coffin of a world

Wishing for your happiness

Wishing for your love

Author's Note

Opinions please even if you just wanna say its awful has no flow ect.

Reviews

[Hippy's Sister]

This poem does express your feelings...for Alyssa? i thought it was very sad:( i liked the way it flowed along though. keep writing your poems are getting better and better(:

"You was the air I breathed" Try switching was for were.

This is such a sad piece, but well written. You express your feelings really well. The final part did it for me.
Nice write,
~Satan's Toaster

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

wow, im sorry for your pain, been through this before.... i wish someone would feel this way for me...

[Jamie]

'I can't see anyone else, I'm blinded by you" - beautiful! =]