Life is But a Dream Waiting for You to Wake up on the Other Side

They say that dreams are fake

A simple illusion

But who is to say what is fake

Who is to say what’s life

Who is to say this all isn’t but a dream

For its all one big dream

So why not make the best we can of this dream

In dreams we can do whatever our hearts desire

So lets make this dream a good one

So when we awake

We can view our dreams as the castles in the sky they are

In a good light

Not being disappointed

In all the missed chances

All the places where we gave up when it grew to dark

So lets make this dream a good one

Not a nightmare

Where we were to consumed by the darkness to push on

So what are you wanting to do

Throw your dreams away

Or make something of them

For in this dream you are the blacksmith

You can forge whatever you want

So will you be happy when you wake up

For life is but a dream…

Just waiting for you to wake up

On the other side

Where you can see

If you followed your dreams

Author's Note

just started almost fully done but tell me what you think so far

Reviews

[Angelheaded Hipster]

I like where youre going with this, and dreams are often said that they are the unconscious desires of the id. Freud, I believe. but dreams are interesting, and sometimes, just sometimes...if you chase them down hard enough, you can make these dreams come to a realization.
However, it is also easy to live in a dreamworld to escape reality, and that's no good for anyone.

Id like to see this when its finished.

[The Last Poetic King]

there sseems to be something missing to me. but overall i enjoyed this.