Californian Dreams of Love

a vision of mine of me in cali

I dream my Californian dream

 

 

On the boardwalk by the beach

I'd sit and strum my melody

 

 

I'm happy now

i've found my calling

My only problem I'm truly starving

 

 

I may be homeless

But I'm truly happy

 

 

I'd look to my guitar

Which fills all wants

But wont succomb my rumbling gut

 

 

When then I'd look to see

A dark-haired goddess

offering life to me

 

 

She fills me with more than food

A sense of love

And happiness to

 

 

In the end its only my fantasy

Which one day I will turn into to my reality

Author's Note

Please give opinion its but a dream of mine

Reviews

[Moth Phoenix]

It's an awesome dream love.
I have the same sort of dream in my mind (:

[X]

nice dream dude.
i've always said that i don't need a roof over my head or a "home" as long as i have my coffee, cigarettes, my books, and someone that cares about me. i've always wanted to be a gypsy.

i like the flow of this piece and the way you can hear the voice strongly. you did a good job man.

[Angelheaded Hipster]

I like this piece. I like the glimmering dream of being a beach performer, and ya know...in So. Cal. a lot of people do that...and I think that if you feel the need...chase the dream...theres only one go round...

[there is no more from m..]

amazing poem

[Katie]

This is beautiful, honestly. The whole image of homeless is a reality to more people than I can even comprehend. Great job.

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

Sounds like a good dream, do you live in S Calif or is it still just a thought..I have always lived here and I can say this is a reality for many..the beach the street artists the warm summer night filled with the scent of the sea breeze..anyhow if you do live here you know and if not you have imagined it well.