My Place

This one underwent a bit of change. It started off as something else, I changed it's structure and purpose about 4 times during the writing. Sadly, I'm never really pleased with something, and usually most of my poetry ends up undergoing this transform

My knees begin to shake,
The endless sky grows heavy,
My reserves of stamina wane
As my body starts to warp.

My arms begin to tremble,
World's seas weighing on them,
All the oceans centered on my mass
starts to dance and spill over.

My thoughts begin to scatter,
Physics of the spirituality and science,
The lines of distinction fade away
Reality starts to bend and break away.

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That was good.. short but very good!!!