Just A Little Prophecy

Don’t spit me your philosophy,

They’re usually filled with hypocrisy,

Your wisdom always fails you,

And I’m left with an apology.

 

I swear you do this purposely,

You do this all too constantly,

Are you trying to set me up?

I’ve started to question your loyalty.

 

My time is a commodity,

And should not be used irresponsibly,

Do this again my friend,

And I’m afraid I’ll have to strangle thee.

Author's Note

Poetry isn't really my strong point but i decided to try my hand at it today and came up with this.

~A

Reviews

[Aiden]

You know what, i kind of like this, its relatable big time, you have no idea how many times ive felt this, good work!

[Auria]

Thanks. (:

~A

[Legendary_Princess]

You did a great job, to be honest you sound like you could be a noble or royalty. I was sucked in by your great choice of words, I like your vocabulary.

[Auria]

Thank you.

~A

[Legendary_Princess]

No problem :D

[A. Matthew Greenia]

This is really good. The rhyming is great (something I always struggle with). You should absolutely continue to write poetry.

[Auria]

I understand. I usually struggle a lot with rhyme and so that's why i tend not to write poems. Thank you.

~A

[Lostangel]

I think you did a great job... this is excellent and filled with emotion...Smiles, Tammie

[Auria]

Thanks.

~A

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

You are awfully young to write poetry so well! Keep it up! The last word; did you mean to write thy or thee?

[Auria]

Oops thee, and thank you.