Walks in the mind
A Book by Stretched_Strings
© 2016 Stretched_Strings
Author's Note
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What meaning do you obtain from this? Is this worth continuing? What emotions do you ascertain from this?
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This piece really touched me, even though it's just a few sentences. I myself wouldn't like to live another person's life, but my own life, and walk my own path. It's a beautiful bittersweet poem in itself. Good job, and thanks for sharing. :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you so much for taking the time to share your thoughts on my piece, do you have any constructi.. read moreThank you so much for taking the time to share your thoughts on my piece, do you have any constructive criticism for this piece?
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8 Years Ago
No problem! And after reading it one more time, I realized you wrote, "Walk 'anther's' path." I thin.. read moreNo problem! And after reading it one more time, I realized you wrote, "Walk 'anther's' path." I think you meant 'another's' but aside from that, this is perfect. :)
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Added on September 12, 2016
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Stretched_StringsStarkville, MS
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