My Rainbow Valentine

Wow...so this was originally made for a contest, but that person is no longer a member of the cafe. :/ Oh well...now it's for you guys. Have fun and enjoy! :]

My Rainbow Valentine

 

My dearest Valentine, this piece is for you

I want you to know how much my love for you grew

I’ve painted a rainbow in different colors and hues

In hopes that you will say that you love me just as much too

 

The reds stand for my burning desire to be held

In your arms only

For my lips and yours to be gelled

Never again will we be lonely

 

The orange and yellows are the colors of your personality

Bright, fun, and a little quirky

Loud but quiet

Humble yet a tad proud

And full of originality

 

The greens and blues stand for your eyes

They were the first thing I noticed about you

The colors and brightness had caught me by surprise

But somehow I knew

You wouldn’t go and put on a disguise

And worse- tell me any lies

 

Violet is the last of the colors

It stands for my loyalty to you

Never will I leave you

Never will I be untrue

 

I’ve told you all of this before

But I just wanted you to be reminded

That you are the colors in my heart

The brush that keeps on drawing

The painting that keeps on growing

 

You are my Rainbow Valentine.

 

Author's Note

Hmm..I'd really like any constructive criticism on this one. Any ideas, comments, or anything else that you have inside of you, please tell me! I would love to hear what you think. :]

Always,
-Aurelia ♥

Reviews

[Adrian K. Smith]

There is something about the meshing of colors in this sense in regards to love. We have so many thoughts on this color or that color, but we always use them to break things apart - to label - and to separate. This person is a blue, this person is a red, this person is a green - as we go through breaking everything down into smaller parts and missing the whole that can be offered by viewing the colors as they work in unison and the greater meaning that can be offered by and found within them...

[The DuchessPoet]

Ci� � fatta molto bene, il mio amico!
Grazie per entrare nel mio concorso!

[Ange Pange]

omg! thats beautiful! its really unique n special. good job!

[poetic soul]

nice flow.. beautiful justification of the title "rainbow valentine".... :)

Regards,
Poetic Soul

[Victoria Chang]

Wow!! This stuff is really nice, very descriptive of your 'valentine'. This poem reads hearts all over!!

[♡Moon Child♡..]

I really love this poem! It's very sweet and precious and speaks of love! Check out my stuff!
Happy Writing!

[BeautifulDisaster]

I really like this.
Good job.

[An owl on the moon]

So beautiful, sweet, tender... You lift up love to such a wonderful place; where it should be! Always glad to see you writing poetry!!!

[Adeline]

This is awesome! I wouldn't change any of it, I love it! Nice job! :)

[Dalaina Renee]

This is a cute poem! I like the way you wrote it out! It flows well too!

[Lady leah]

I love the way you intertwined the colors of the rainbow in this write.