i think as poets we often question our existence...it is ephemeral at best...we return to dust as quickly as we grow from that dust into a human form, with feelings, expression, etc.
each of us is a mystery to explore and be explored...and we need to take advantage of the short time we have to do that, and make a difference.
j.
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8 Years Ago
Yes, there's an universe within us. We are the part of universe, we are the universe. We just need t.. read moreYes, there's an universe within us. We are the part of universe, we are the universe. We just need to find the purpose of our existence and make this journey a worthwhile. Thank you for your thoughts. :)
Nicely written...we are all dust...beyond that we are all nothing....good job....Please review my poem on universe" yet another day in the life of the universe"
The ultimate truth of life, 'we're all stardust' .
I love your approach towards life. I wonder how you could be so sensible and knowledgeable in such an age. I guess your experiences made you what you are. Will be eagerly waiting for your next work.....
Keep writing, keep enlightening....
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
I guess our experiences are our treasures, these moments of impact accumulate in us to form our base.. read moreI guess our experiences are our treasures, these moments of impact accumulate in us to form our base of individuality. So keep them close. ;)
i think as poets we often question our existence...it is ephemeral at best...we return to dust as quickly as we grow from that dust into a human form, with feelings, expression, etc.
each of us is a mystery to explore and be explored...and we need to take advantage of the short time we have to do that, and make a difference.
j.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Yes, there's an universe within us. We are the part of universe, we are the universe. We just need t.. read moreYes, there's an universe within us. We are the part of universe, we are the universe. We just need to find the purpose of our existence and make this journey a worthwhile. Thank you for your thoughts. :)
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