Unpredictable

How easy is it for you to change your mind?
You take a few steps ahead, then pause and rewind.
I cannot comprehend what is it that you want,
You love me yet love me not.
Am I to blame ?
Are you at fault?
Guess we'll never know
As we play the blame game; we'll never bow.

Author's Note

Feedback ?

Reviews

[Chuck]

Love the theme, good tone to you're words (warning the next thing I say I say because I'm not a fan of rhyme) I'm not sure how to read the last line, It seems like you're reaching for the rhyme, I think it's more powerful if you end it after "game" because 1) what game do folks bow after and 2) the short sentence packs a nice punch. BUT BUT BUT this is my opinion and this is you're poem SO you can do whatever you want and it's the truest most accurate and I can shut up!

I dig it!

[Aura Devour]

Thank you for your review. Yeah, the last line, after "game", i felt like something's missing, so I added another line. "We'll never bow"- we are never ready to take the initiative to negotiate.

[Ayushi Beura]

Few lines express genuine amazing thought...loved reading it, thanks for sharing

[Tom]

Like the unmovable object meets the irresistible force, ah, love is never simple is it ?

A fascinatingly penned, poetic paradox !

[Aura Devour]

Thanks a lot.

[Alucard6336]

Nice. You don't have to ask for feedback when this is picture perfect. I dislike using too many words to describe a situation in writing, and this says many things without many words.

Superb :)

[Aura Devour]

Thank you so much. :)

[Kaliope]

A complex truth of love and life beautifully described. It takes a lot of skill to express so much in just a few lines!

[Aura Devour]

Thank you for the kind words. :)

[samparks,sam]

That so sweet poem how can I appriciate you. sweet feeling I can asssume after read it nice, good

[Blackheart]

Beautifully penned down. This is reality. The naked truth. Love is confusing, contradictory. Revolving around us in it's ever paradoxical form. I think, finding it's meaning is something we cannot yet achieve. Ever deceiving yet the complex of all emotions.

[Neytri]

I guess this is life. It makes us dream and yet, it breaks it. And you're right as always, no one's actually wrong, no one's to be blamed. But then, who or what is actually going wrong? I guess, there's no answer to it.