1970's

Simply something I never could say ...

I would love nothing

more but to tell

you

how I am

in love

with your receding

hairline

but it would only

make you feel old

I desire so badly to

show you how much

everything about you

yes

your age too

turns me on

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

This makes a quick... yet bold statement... about wanting an older gentleman... nothing wrong with that concept... seems the attributes of him are what you're into and not necessarily the factors everyone looks at... beauty is in the eye of the beholder... so to speak with this verse...

[Michael G. Smith]

A lot was more was said in these few lines. Beauty is only skin deep. I tell people I'm ugly, bald and far and I don't care. The reason I say this to people because it means I am confident in who I am and not going to worry if I look beautiful to others.

[isus]

there's something wrong in here :D

[zainul]

Lovely thoughts you could express at last through this piece.

[AmandaN]

What a lovely message!
I enjoyed reading this its structure looks good visually and it reads well.
Great :-)