Woodhella

A young girl walks through the woods of hell

I wondered why the woods were named WoodHella
Was there a accident, was there a murder?
I was to investigate

I walked into the woods
The rocky path was colored red by something
I went down a hill
I could here laughter and running
It was like Narnia but more scary

I turned onto a trail call Vasilli
I was confused by that name too
I looked over to my side
I could not believe what I saw

Demons circling the devil
Fire as hot as the sun
Goblins throwing bodies into the fire
They all stop and look at me
I start to run

They are chasing with high speed
I dont look back once
I keep running and notice my converse are untied
I fall to the ground
The Demons and Goblins getting closer
It was to late to run
I was "doomed"

Author's Note

ignore grammar,spelling,and punctuation

Reviews

[((Teenage_Poet_Loser))]

i like this =D very talented.. =] but like in everything in life needs a bit of polish =]... the hardest thing to get is the idea, but this is awesome! and just a few touch ups and this will be more great than awesome!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was an interesting poem. This actually made me laugh just a little bit. Thanks for sharing. :D

[Cameron Prisco]

I love the emotion and the twist. great write

[The Batman]

I saw no problem with this as far as grammar and such goes. The poem was great, however. Greatly crafted with fluid words. Great job, and keep up the good work.

[Jane Doe]

It's was queer but interesting none the less I enjoyed it(:

Xoxo
~abbie
100/100