Daddy Come Home

Daddy Come Home

A Poem by Audrey Nicole
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A young girl only sees her father over a computer screen

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Dad come home
I only see you over a computer screen
I cry every night I go to bed
Mom is busy and she never has time for me
I pray every night that I see your face again the next day
I look at your stunning pictures in your uniform
I cant focus at school because I am worried
I wish that I was on this deadly trip
I dont care I just want to be with you so badly
You put your hand on the screen and tell me that you love me
I asked you so many times when you were coming home
You responded with the word soon every time
That wasnt the answer I was looking for
I was looking for tomorrow.
When you said you loved me
It was the same day I cried
I read the grave carvings everyday

John H. Lewis
1968-2011
Gold Bless America
You broke your promise
I broke mine too.
I said I wouldnt kill myself if you came home
You didnt.
You dont have to worry because your standing right next to me at the gates of Heaven.

© 2011 Audrey Nicole


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Wow, this is really heart breaking. But it's a really great poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


very good and very sad. i almost wanna cry

Posted 12 Years Ago


I wanted to cry so hard

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was an emotional piece. You did a great job on it.
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


ohmygosh, This is awesome! Keep up the great work(;.This made me want to cry.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Rae
Literally gave me chills. Very nice.(:

Posted 12 Years Ago


Life as we live it is seldom as we want it.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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