This is just about society's expectations; what's politically correct and whatnot. I deliberately wrote this almost... Childishly, hysterically.
Curl your fingers into fists;
They're waiting for me
To do them wrong!
So,
What with who did you assist?
Starting with the burnt hit list?
Moving down the names,
Arranged into a blazing song?
Now the page is much too long.
Now who says I can't believe
What or who I want to see?
Songs that I just want to sing?
Voices that just talk to me?
Hah! Never more will I suppress
These flaming feelings
Of regret!
I will not forget,
And I have not forgotten,
The bleak black fires that I had set.
Then are you sure we'll never let
Them claim conditions they have not met,
And claim the fires that I had set?
This is just about society's expectations; what's politically correct and whatnot. I deliberately wrote this almost childishly, hysterically. I'm not sure if I got the point across, but whatever. This was still really fun to write!
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Wow!!! I almost didn't read this cause it's more than five lines long BUT I DIDN'T FALL ASLEEP HALFWAY THROUGH!!! :D:D:D CONGRATULATIONS! :D
I don't know if you got the point across because I'm not sure what the point is. O.o I'm pretty slow.
*reads again*
OH I SEE NOW. YES. NICE WORK, M'LORD.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
HAHAHAHAHAH oh my gosh thank you soooo much for reviewing! XD yeah you're not slow... Things just ma.. read moreHAHAHAHAHAH oh my gosh thank you soooo much for reviewing! XD yeah you're not slow... Things just make sense in my head and when I put them down its basically a crapload of ramblings and stuff... Haha, anyways, thanks again.
11 Years Ago
YOU'RE WELCOME!!!
Heyyy, me tooooooooooooooooooo!!! HUZZAH!
11 Years Ago
*high fives* THIS IS SUCH A REVOLUTIONARY DAY FOR ME:D
11 Years Ago
*misses* WOW, ME TOO!!! :D
11 Years Ago
Hahah thanks, my face needed a high five too! It was feeling rather left out! Don't worry face, you'.. read moreHahah thanks, my face needed a high five too! It was feeling rather left out! Don't worry face, you'll never be the third wheel.
11 Years Ago
Wow, you're welcome! :D Hey, now my face is sad!!! D:
11 Years Ago
*pets face* Don't worry, Hugo's face, you'll never be the fourth wheel!
11 Years Ago
*face says "Awwww, thank you!!!" and bursts into tears of joy* Wait, isn't four wheels a good thing?.. read more*face says "Awwww, thank you!!!" and bursts into tears of joy* Wait, isn't four wheels a good thing? o.O
11 Years Ago
Not on a motorcycle or tricycle! And those are obviously WAY more badass than a car. Especially the .. read moreNot on a motorcycle or tricycle! And those are obviously WAY more badass than a car. Especially the tricycle.
They see me rolling. They are slightly disliking me,
11 Years Ago
Oooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh!!! Oh yes. >:D
Well that's how we roll... >:D
11 Years Ago
Yes. I'm so bad. They can't handle my swagger.
11 Years Ago
Oh snap. SWAAAGGGG!!!!! We're rollin... swag...
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11 Years Ago
They be havin' epileptic seizures from all dis swag bro.
Flying turds of crappiness! How will we ever get out of this one?!
11 Years Ago
I suppose that's the catch! We will NEVER ESCAPE THIS DREADFUL SITUATION. UNTIL WE DIE. And then res.. read moreI suppose that's the catch! We will NEVER ESCAPE THIS DREADFUL SITUATION. UNTIL WE DIE. And then respawn somewhere in Africa, and speak Swahili.
Writing on society's expectations was the need of the hour.
I am glad you just did it.
Childish writing gives one the chance to pull legs too.
I specially appreciate the last stanza.
"Hah! Never more will I suppress
These flaming feelings
Of regret!
I will not forget,
And I have not forgotten,
The bleak black fires that I had set.
Then are you sure we'll never let
Them claim conditions they have not met,
And claim the fires that I had set?
Wow!!! I almost didn't read this cause it's more than five lines long BUT I DIDN'T FALL ASLEEP HALFWAY THROUGH!!! :D:D:D CONGRATULATIONS! :D
I don't know if you got the point across because I'm not sure what the point is. O.o I'm pretty slow.
*reads again*
OH I SEE NOW. YES. NICE WORK, M'LORD.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
HAHAHAHAHAH oh my gosh thank you soooo much for reviewing! XD yeah you're not slow... Things just ma.. read moreHAHAHAHAHAH oh my gosh thank you soooo much for reviewing! XD yeah you're not slow... Things just make sense in my head and when I put them down its basically a crapload of ramblings and stuff... Haha, anyways, thanks again.
11 Years Ago
YOU'RE WELCOME!!!
Heyyy, me tooooooooooooooooooo!!! HUZZAH!
11 Years Ago
*high fives* THIS IS SUCH A REVOLUTIONARY DAY FOR ME:D
11 Years Ago
*misses* WOW, ME TOO!!! :D
11 Years Ago
Hahah thanks, my face needed a high five too! It was feeling rather left out! Don't worry face, you'.. read moreHahah thanks, my face needed a high five too! It was feeling rather left out! Don't worry face, you'll never be the third wheel.
11 Years Ago
Wow, you're welcome! :D Hey, now my face is sad!!! D:
11 Years Ago
*pets face* Don't worry, Hugo's face, you'll never be the fourth wheel!
11 Years Ago
*face says "Awwww, thank you!!!" and bursts into tears of joy* Wait, isn't four wheels a good thing?.. read more*face says "Awwww, thank you!!!" and bursts into tears of joy* Wait, isn't four wheels a good thing? o.O
11 Years Ago
Not on a motorcycle or tricycle! And those are obviously WAY more badass than a car. Especially the .. read moreNot on a motorcycle or tricycle! And those are obviously WAY more badass than a car. Especially the tricycle.
They see me rolling. They are slightly disliking me,
11 Years Ago
Oooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh!!! Oh yes. >:D
Well that's how we roll... >:D
11 Years Ago
Yes. I'm so bad. They can't handle my swagger.
11 Years Ago
Oh snap. SWAAAGGGG!!!!! We're rollin... swag...
This comment has been deleted by this poetry author.
11 Years Ago
They be havin' epileptic seizures from all dis swag bro.
Flying turds of crappiness! How will we ever get out of this one?!
11 Years Ago
I suppose that's the catch! We will NEVER ESCAPE THIS DREADFUL SITUATION. UNTIL WE DIE. And then res.. read moreI suppose that's the catch! We will NEVER ESCAPE THIS DREADFUL SITUATION. UNTIL WE DIE. And then respawn somewhere in Africa, and speak Swahili.