Liar

self-explanatory

 

tempting

it was the question

in my mind

from day one

who is she?

Despite your continued

Effort to deceive me,

I knew…

The picture, your eagerness,

Your pull-back…

I smile

my superiority remains

indubitably hidden

the game,

yours was over

mine a continuation

from the last unsuspecting victim

laughter creeps into my throat,

permanently as I can no longer

take it seriously

it intrigued me how you

weaved your web of disgraceful deceit, not

realizing the

ingenuity with which you dealt

I have no pity.

Underestimation allots me

The power, I readily grasp

With no intent of release…

Author's Note

i guess it's one of those things where u have to ask yourself if your girl knows that you're cheating...the answer is yes

Reviews

[Sseoni]

What an amazing poem! I loved it! The details, descriptions, wording and vocabulary totally wowed me! I found this piece very intriguing due to the fact that such a simple thing could be turned into something so genuine and wonderful! I liked the flow and vibe that the poem gave off! I really enjoyed reading this! Fantastic poem! :D

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

wow. um..da um..wow. This one is...wow. The only bad thing about this one is that it ends...

[mR668]

The making of an excellent lawyer! Sniff em out & shut em down! Again you deliver with excellence! I could see your one raised eyebrow as you spit this piece! LOL

[John_Cox]

Haha perfect and I've been there. You can't believe the person thinks you're dumb enough to lie right to your face! Great write as usual.