What are you hiding from?

What are you hiding from?

A Poem by The Girl with the smile
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Aftermath of a breakup...

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You avoid me


Like I’m the plague

A terrible disease

You don’t want to catch


Like I’m Godzilla

A fire-breathing monster

On a rampage through the city


Like I’m the villain

A Dr. Horrible

A metal crunching Magneto

With an evil plot to rule the world


You avoid me


And then I realize

You’re doing me a favor


Because I’d rather be a Dr. Horrible

Than a Captain Hammer any day

And maybe the stark realization will hit you


That the only thing you’re hiding from

Is a wounded girl with a broken heart 

© 2013 The Girl with the smile


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aaaw. I loved how you ended it. Great job! ;)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

broken heart...nice description....:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a really good read :) makes you question way so act like this and is it intentional... i am just saying.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

o_O.... these kinds of feelings are never good...
awesome job in expressing. keep your head up mama! = )

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 16, 2011
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Hello, my name is Allison. I'm 21 years young. I love writing and being creative. Poetry speaks to my heart and soul. I mostly write about my experiences. :) "Is all that we see or seem, b.. more..

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