TIME CLOCK

To mange your time

ticking it flows by

fixing --- they say

you must sever time 

to fix time.

Author's Note

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im adding this one to a commercial for a amateur video contest about time.

Reviews

[Rachel Richardson]

I always have a difficult time trying to decipher this style of poetry, yet I find its elusive nature to make the poem even more powerful. I get a sense of urgency here like the clock is ticking rather quickly.

[Lonely Shadow]

Very cryptic and quite thought provoking. Getting into a conversation with time as the topic is always a brain explosion.