Looking Glass

the silver pane, not dull or crass

beneath a thinning frame of glass

a mimic moves, with great perfection

as i stare at my reflection

i see myself, all and whole

and wonder, is this my soul?

The mirror it seems, a translucent mass

a portal through the looking glass 

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

I like this, the scanning falters occasionally but I'm ok with that...Says a lot in a short space

[grayscale]

Thank you for the feedback and constructive criticism, I will work on it , thank you .

[Vicky Hand]

I love this poem, it's catchy and you say so much in few words. Do you write stories too? Thank you for reviewing my story it's the first I've ever finished. I'm going to read another poem of yours now.

[grayscale]

I do write stories, but have little time to type them.

[Kelsey Smith]

I really love the flow of your rhyme scheme here, it feels very fluid. The word choice is also very nice, I really like your tone and the feel you give to this poem. Wonderful work!

[grayscale]

Thank you very much.