Water Lilies

I will be waiting
Down by the water lilies
Do you remember?

Reviews

[Akira Kodama]

This has a (nice) vague feel to it. For me it made me think of an anecdote involving exactly what was suggested, meeting together by water lilies. Though this also provokes multiple outcomes in my mind, after meeting by the lilies, or maybe not meeting at all. A good write that makes me think.

[Xanthous Crow]

I'm glad you enjoyed. I like to keep things vague, sometimes. It enables the reader to form an outcome to his/her own. Although.... sometimes I don't always succeed.

[Akira Kodama]

I think you pulled it off quite nicely here.

[...Relic...]

I agree with the others, serene, innocent, and it has a feeling to it of love and excitement about it. Like it.

[Xanthous Crow]

Those are serene... I guess she will.... nice Haiku (cause it is about nature) and not about other things). Liked it, muchly

- Elisa

[Xanthous Crow]

I hope so. And thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)