Something I Did

Sleepless night, sleepless night
Going over our conversations
Word for word
Back and forth, back and forth
And I'm tired
Did I do something?
Was it something I said?
Or maybe it was something I didn't do?
I think I've been adequate....
Never cruel, I think,
Waiting on you.
Whatever it was I did do
I'm not sorry

Reviews

[Akira Kodama]

This is a great piece. I like how you worded it in a way that someone would think. The last line caught me off guard. I was actually expecting something the opposite, or at least a little different. Very nice.

[Xanthous Crow]

Thank you. Yeah, I was thinking about going down that route, making it end with an apology. But I thought about it and realized.... I'm not really sorry. Just tired. Really, really tired. I'm glad you enjoyed Indigo :)